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E.N.D. Ch.15 Getting Back To Where It Once Began
Jericho sat in a wooden chair by the fireplace thinking to him self, “Hmm…the best way to get back to the base without being noticed would probably be by train. There’s lots of crowding, so it would be hard or them to keep tabs on us. Not to mention it that it’s faster than on foot.”
Kross was standing arms folded, eyes fixed upon Jericho, but with a blank gaze so though it looked like he was looking at him he was in fact in his own world.
Angelica walked in the room dressed in some clothes that she found in a closet. “So, have you two come up with any ideas?” Kross’s attention was still not broken and Jericho looked up at her.
“Yeah, I think I got one. That is if you and Johnny boy there care to listen to me for a change.”
“Go on Remy, tell us of this plan.”
Kross replied eyes now gazing out of a window.
“Yes do tell.”
“Well ya see. I figure we can take multiple trains to get at least half way there. By hopping train to train it would be harder for them to track us both by tickets and by view due to the mass crowds. I haven’t really gotten much more than that at the moment but it’s a hell of a lot better than just sitting here.”
“That…that‘s actually not half bad.”
“Remy you continue to surprise me more and more especially a person with your odd interests.”
“I already told ya, that just because I’m a narcissist, sadomasochist, and so called mentally unstable, doesn’t make me stupid or any less sane then the rest of ya. You got that?”
“Alright, alright; now’s not the time to get mad at each other for now let’s keep that anger towards Varefield.”
“So when do should we leave?”
“How about after I get something to eat?” Angelica walked into the kitchen and picked up a banana and threw it at him.
“There happy?”
“Hehehe…oh the things I could say right about now.”
“Jericho I swear if you say one thing-“
“Remy this is really not the time okay? So can we leave now?”
“You were the one that was hungry and held us up in the first place. Whatever let’s just go.” The three quickly dressed themselves in newer clothes set off. Mainly because all those blood stains would have caught quite a lot of attention.
After arriving at the train station, Jericho’s argument with the guy at the ticket guy about the prices, only to get forced out by security. They finally just snuck aboard and sat down. Though not able to feel tired Angelica forced her self to fall asleep, and after a while ended up lying across Jericho’s lap. He looked at her with gentle eye and he softly stroked her hair. Kross was a few seats behind and couldn’t see what had been going on. The train came to a stop with a slight jerking motion. Angelica was awakened by it and glances around. She looked up and saw Jericho’s face. Realizing where she was laying she quickly sat back up and slapped Jericho calling him a pervert.
“What the hell? I didn’t do anything you’re the one that fell asleep and lay down on my lap, though I have to say that I did enjoy it.”
“Ugh, let’s just get on the next train.”
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Comments
XpaperninjaX Says:
Ok, critique time. It's good, and funny, but I do have some concerns.
1. "Jericho’s argument with the guy at the ticket guy about the prices, only to get escorted out by security." - fix this line,
2. "Kross was a few seats behind and couldn’t see this, but I’m sure if he could he’d be pissed. " - its weird that the author says this.
3. When they are back at the house and talking, it is almost impossible to tell who is talking when. I figured it out by pure dialect alone, but new readers might have trouble.
Other than that, its pretty good.
Keldorix Says:
finally man, long time no see.
awesome, poor Jericho
Bozo Says:
Hi Patrick, good to see yo are still writing. Is snuck a real word? I have been teaching languages for 12 yrs now and have not come across this word before. Maybe it is an Americanism. Anyway, good job on the writing.Descriptive and well formed story .Tally ho!