Last page that will be in color for a while. Oh my God it takes me too long to color these >.> Mostly because I just put too much effort into parts of it. I'm mostly going to stick with coloring pages that introduce new characters or if I just think that it's significant enough to be in color. Also you're going to notice style changes, it's unavoidable so yeah, get used to it.
Sushi's eye's kinda bug me. I just noticed the misshape to them after I colored them so it was too late to fix them. These are, again, somewhat older drawings (roughly a month old). So there are some flaws that I already see.
I'll accept critiques anyway though
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Razor (c)
Moo Sensei 
Comments
Arctic Master Says:
Oooooooooooooooooooooh s***... o_o;;
Moo Sensei Says:
I like the chibi versions of them, in my pants. :>
Something I noticed is like, it's a little dark, and it's especially noticeable in the third panel, her hair kinda blends in, in my pants.
I feel like it's way darker than the last one, in my pants.
Also, it's kinda flat in quit a few places, in my pants. The only places it looks like it's really popping out at you, it around Sushi, in my pants.
Even then, her face could use more shading, in my pants.
Also, even though it's nighttime, I think you should add highlights on the most protruding areas in my pants.
I feel mean for saying this, but I really think Razor looks weird, in my pants. I think the thing is the lack of shading, and his head looks kinda flat, in my pants.
Last thing I notice is her boobs in my pants.
They look fine on top, but then they scoop in to be almost flat on the bottom, in my pants.
She would be fine if she were wearing a really tight corset under her breasts...in my pants. But otherwise it looks unnatural in my pants.
My favorite things would be her nose in my pants.
The detailing in the skull, in my pants. I also like her hair (though it'd be nice to see a few stray strands)in my pants.
Oh and I love her glove, the folds in it make it look really pretty in my pants.