The ordering of speech in the second panel is a little buggered. If you don't want to swap sides where the bubbles hang, perhaps moving the old man's speech bubble higher, giving it a sort of higher priority.
I gotta say, m'fraid it's very hard to see. I didn't pick up on the arrow that was shot at him, made me think the "Well that was rude" comment was a reply to the previous comic. Personally I'd up the comic/sprite size a step larger, and have a the first panel split into two for a little emphasis.
Look forward to the next part, sorry if I appear to be raining all over your work.
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Foxcat Says:
I'd be careful of that massive bonehead.
The ordering of speech in the second panel is a little buggered. If you don't want to swap sides where the bubbles hang, perhaps moving the old man's speech bubble higher, giving it a sort of higher priority.
I gotta say, m'fraid it's very hard to see. I didn't pick up on the arrow that was shot at him, made me think the "Well that was rude" comment was a reply to the previous comic. Personally I'd up the comic/sprite size a step larger, and have a the first panel split into two for a little emphasis.
Look forward to the next part, sorry if I appear to be raining all over your work.
Dante likes to monologue when we walks
xD
Rosencruez Says:
That mage has no indoor voice, does he?