I'd love it if you were to please critique this one! I'm not making you, but I'd really appreciate it if you did!
RUN!
A doodle that turned into another practice work ;D I actually kinda like this one, especially the little ken ha demon struggling on the rock
By the way, the struggling ken ha is male, the rest female. male's aren't trained for combat and stoofs so that's why he's struggling
They're on a hill, that's why there's no stuff in the background besides the sun, which I'm proud of~ ;D took me forever to get right though, lol.
By the way, with his position, that's based on how I run, yes I do run very oddly |D;; And his hand closest to him, I messed up on iiiit ;A; As well as his head.
I tried to use a different theme for this picture instead of my normal basic pose, did I succeed?
art, Nazo, and the ken ha species (c) me
Comments
Laudie Says:
This is good, even for just practice. The ken ha are cute :)
I don't think the hand is messed up. I like the coloring/shading on the clothing.
It needs more contrast and it the light source doesn't seem to be shown so well.
SuicidalFun Says:
Kawaii! I love it! I want a lil ken ha demon! >w<
Yoake Ryuhi Says:
First off the sun looks much better here.
You really need to make your shadows deeper/darker D8 It would add sooooo much to the overall picture. It takes some practice but just think of adding layers of shading. First start with your lightest shade then move on to the next lightest all until you get to your darkest shade. This goes for some of your background elements as well.
Some clouds would add some balance to the picture. The sky just seems too empty.
Don't worry I run funny too
Darkgun Says:
Ask and thou shall receive.... A critique, that is. And I'll try not to overlap what the others said.
Proportions seem... difficult, for the running pose. Perhaps considering a quickly sketched side view of the action before moving to 3/4. Make sure with loose clothing that the folds match the motion. A specific example would be the fella's pants, particularly at the bottom of the legs.
Another, general suggestion I thought up today would be the inclusion of varying line depths. This smooths out most of the image, since the lines will, for the most part, be thinner, and give the image a more dynamic feel.
Barefoot = hardcore
Odd posture = wobbly
Barefoot + Odd posture = hardcore wobbly.
Nitori Says:
theres something wrong with the torso..but i cant quite put my finger on it.....anyways good job! me likey!
angel1212 Says:
oh noooes run little one run.
i like it. but the background is a little blah. the eyes are weird, they are crossed
but over all i like it