His shoulders don't look right. I think they should be placed upper and moved more to the back.
His right arm (the upper part, above the elbow) is too long in my opinion.
His torso is kind of shapeless, too.
The japanese/chinese/whatever letter-thing is a bit blurry, did you use a brush for it?
If you did, it'd be better not to make the brush bigger than the sample size (or you should get hi-res brushes).
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I think the shades should have a bit more contrast. That's all I can think of right now.
LEMONcube Says:
Hmmmmm.
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Instead of using blur kinda try and use a solid brush?
Just to make the shading more dramatic.
Also I like the tie
Sprite Killer Says:
His shoulders don't look right. I think they should be placed upper and moved more to the back.
His right arm (the upper part, above the elbow) is too long in my opinion.
His torso is kind of shapeless, too.
The japanese/chinese/whatever letter-thing is a bit blurry, did you use a brush for it?
If you did, it'd be better not to make the brush bigger than the sample size (or you should get hi-res brushes).
Plus he looks more like a "she"SkyWhiteFox Says:
aaaaaa Bishie *o*
Well im lazy to give crits today so.. sorry ;A;