< 'just another day' by kindaincredible

FEAR

It rapes the mind and takes control of us. Sweaty, shaky palms. Paranoia starts to sink in. Things start to appear that aren't really there. We run, but there's no escaping it. No matter how fast we run, it's always faster. The heart pounds. Sinking feeling in your gut. Your senses are heightened ever so quickly. What was that sound? Darkness swirls around you. No matter what you tell yourself, you don't believe it. Shadows play tricks on your eyes. Your mind starts to wander. Why must we give in to this monster? Breathing slowly. Close your eyes, but it's still there. Things aren't what they seem to be.It consumes us all.
> 'freakin a' by kindaincredible

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Oct 6th 2009
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fear free write essay
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ugh some free write essay i had to do in comp class last week. i'm definitely no writer, but it's what i felt so... yeh

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AwesomeGirl86 Says:

Nice poem..er..um..essay.

I say you did a good job of describing of fear.