My verse to "Revamped".
(Grinace)
Blast an explosion, crash by corrosion/
wild ace, two faced, erased by erosion/
bass is emotion, embrace the commotion/
disgrace, replace, im loco to motion/
devotion, exporting porportions/
giving the notions, the omens,/
proving devotion, liquid to ocean/
the fires, running to tires,/
hanging on wires,/
desires to what you aspire/
reasions to inquire...Rhymes/
passing me by, blink of the eye/
while my cousin is the only persion whos making me try/
living the life, to loving my life/
to leading my life,/
never gonna be the only persion to end up in strife/
illuminate to create, ahnialate the estate/
then debate to sedate, then if not then we wait/
till i break of this fate, wether late or to date,
recreate something great, then if not then ill wait...
(Scarr)
pass it now like you giving me the light that i live /
it is right that give.......like Scarr who it is /
tell em mee that be spitting so lyrically /
its critically done....wen im on grin keep it officially /
did you miss me........knowing that im gone till im back /
its fact.......i still pack the mac in the ack /
yoo grin where he at......Imma pop his lid /
let em pop what he pop till her popped where he live /
kiiiiiiiiid.......i dont think you ready for all this /
tryna shout me out , noo phone what you call this ? /
CORDLESS , poppa done made a n**** hard fist /
if the mac attack.......blow holes where his heart is /
awwwwww ish..........let me....reverse time /
in prime,i rhyme....unkind....till shine /
so if i write grime...would you bite mine /
line.......that'll mentally unblind...the blind /
Comments
4th Watcher Says:
Intriguing... I like...
myrainbowsocks Says:
love it!
The Unseen Obscurity Says:
Done know this is awesome as rass bra~ I give you much deserved props~

Rade Says:
You just created a new era of tunes
POPAROCKA Says:
It's like... rap, but it's not... I like it i think... @.@ I defiantly like the melody of the song.