So after such a long wait, here's page 6! I know it's been a month but I didn't have a scanner for the longest time. Now I'm back on track and I should be able to get about a page up a week.
I colored this one to give a better idea of the color scheme of Ryoko. The next page will be colored too. It very basic coloring and shading so it's not supposed to be anything intricate, just to get the idea across. I gotta say I really hate how I drew Ryoko. It's a month old but I just see so many flaws in it. This is also the last page that I had to piece the panels together in Photoshop. From now on I'm drawing out all the panels on the same piece of paper. It seems a lot easier and more natural that way.
Oh and you're going to see major style changes through the next few pages. Sorry but my recent style change hasn't been gradual.
So enjoy and thanks for reading!
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Moo Sensei Says:
I can't critique things if you say you already see the flaws >3>;
Imma critique the coloring a little bit though, shading around the entire face to suggest shape would help, also, adding more shape to the nose and adding shading around the eyes would bring them out too.
I know it sounds like a lot but, it would only take a few minutes, I think.
Other than that it's kinda cool to see it in color, I like the way it still looks like it's night out, without being to dark. :3
Tuyuq Vampram Says:
Oh, color! *wags tail*