As far as paneling goes, due to sheezy mucking it up I can't really see the dividers.
As far as dialogue stuff goes, I see you're going back to how ya did it and the beginning of CN life 'cept with a castlevania flavor. Personally I'd fade the panel aside from the character portraits a little darker, somewhat akin to how Dawn of sorrow or Order of Ecclesia did it. But then again that's your preference.
Though I kinda feel panel four would have had more impact if you left the portrait out. Dunno why it just seems that it'd have more umph that way.
I've expected much more than this to be honest. I know it is hard to make comics, especially when you have a new format like such. But it could have been longer. That's just what I think at least, good job though. I'll read more in the future, do your best~!
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Elfofchaos Says:
Okay, I'm gonna give my ten cents on this.
As far as paneling goes, due to sheezy mucking it up I can't really see the dividers.
As far as dialogue stuff goes, I see you're going back to how ya did it and the beginning of CN life 'cept with a castlevania flavor. Personally I'd fade the panel aside from the character portraits a little darker, somewhat akin to how Dawn of sorrow or Order of Ecclesia did it. But then again that's your preference.
Though I kinda feel panel four would have had more impact if you left the portrait out. Dunno why it just seems that it'd have more umph that way.
Anywho, new series time a go go baby!
Miss Dior Says:
I've expected much more than this to be honest. I know it is hard to make comics, especially when you have a new format like such. But it could have been longer. That's just what I think at least, good job though. I'll read more in the future, do your best~!