One of these days I hope I can make backgrounds nice enough to be considered
scenery porn. I'm happy with how this page came out, but just the other day I was breezing through the archives of the comic and ACK BARF
Aaaaanyway I'm sure you're sick of Rhea wondering what she should do about keeping Lazuli a secret. Sorry. Also, sorry for another boring page. We're making progress, though, honest!
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Comments
SisterGoat Says:
One thing I would suggest is have things cast shadows. Rhea looks rather lonesome without her shadow in the first panel. You might also want to add some various hues for your grass, like patches of yellows, browns, and dark greens. I think the grass just looks a tad too neon green at the moment.
I really like the sense of depth in the second panel and the way the fences/walls stretch over the rolling hills.