-::Another Little Excerpt::-

by Yoli the Wonderer

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-::Another Little Excerpt::-

“Falora, you need to get up.”

My eyes sparked open. Morning already? It felt only seconds ago I had rested my eyes. Just a moment, I had told my brother. Give only a minute and I’ll be ready to set out again. Guilt throbbed inside my breast as I pushed myself clumsily into a sitting position. There, I set forth to rubbing my eyes. The longer I averted his gaze, the better. I could already feel it penetrating through my hands as if they were nothing by a frail veil. I half wondered why he hadn’t just kicked me in the gut. He’d done it many a time before. Always so impatient.

But yet I never complained. It’s hard to have that right in circumstances such as mine. And so, even if he had, I would have sucked it up. If only to quell my quivering heart. Sometimes I would argue inside that next time would be different. I sure knew how to lie to myself.

Only after my eyes felt like they were going to swell did I raise my head. To my relief, he’d taken a second to look off in the distance. In search of patrols, most likely. They were always after us. But I wasn’t concerned with it at the moment. No, it was times like this when his face contorted into anxiety and urgency… That’s when he appeared most real. And that’s when I loved him most.

Something tugged my sleeve and I turned. My violet eyes exchanged a meek smile with the shining green ones of my younger brother. No-- He wasn’t really our kin. But I kept forgetting and so he came to be, regardless. My other sibling disagreed, but I couldn’t help it every time our eyes met as they did. I placed a hand on his cheek, rubbing it with a thumb a moment like a mother would a son. He cringed and reluctantly pulled away. My mind cleared instantly of its foggy waking state.

“Armada, you’re…”

I trailed off, touching the visible bruise I’d been coaxing just seconds before. He only smiled feebly in return. It was amazing how easy our roles could switch. He offered me a hand up and I took it gratefully. Unfortunately, my footing didn’t agree. I found myself backpedaling, his grip giving way from my weight.

A gruff shove came from behind and I toppled forward, finally settling my feet with ever lacking grace. Sometimes I wondered why they tacked something like that onto us felines. I’d yet to find someone to fit that stereotype. For all I knew, it was another myth. But then the world was full of them.
I regretted turning to my savior. His glare instantly bore guilt in the pit of my stomach. I downcast my eyes and rocked back. My feet scuffled the dry ground. The world around us had long since been deserted of any luscious foliage, swept instead in a cloak of sand.

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Sep 12th 2009
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Well, this is actually a little bit more recently written. At the time, Lynx and Viper were really into Nanoha which is some generally mediocre magical girl show (save the weapons and magic system was actually interesting once it fully developed in the second season. Let's not get into the third though.)

They made a roleplaying board off of it and I planned to join since I wanted something to roleplay a little differently. Never finished my profiles though for it and then their interest died off.

Anyway, this was influenced by it. You might remember Oriel, Falora, and Armada from my Guardians drawing. These three I was going to use at that board.

'bout sums things up. Another little snip of my writing that I never ever finish.

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Kiwi Joy Says:

I really enjoyed reading this. I like the way Falora puts little pessimistic comments after all of her thoughts.

You're a very good writer, you should definitely try to finish a short story one day c: