Sep 9th 2009
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This is a song in 2 parts. I tried to give an overall view of the world we live in.Don`t kill me for that.
Yes to comment on the fact that the melody is repetitive; It
is the effect I wanted.I wanted to put this out like a dirge,not a song .The words come out better and for me the words are most important( this type of method is often used in folk music)
AUTUMN LEAVES/ FACTORY DANCE
By ROBIN GIBBS
part 1 YES THIS WORLD IS A FUNNY PLACE
WE ARE ALL WRAPPED UP
IN THIS HUMAN RACE
SEAS ARE TEEMING
LIFE IS STRONG
LOVE HELPING US
TO GET ALONG
AUTUMN COMES
SUMMER TAKES A BOW
IT`S ALL PART
OF THE SEASON SOUND
GOLDS AND YELLOWS
BROWNS AND GREENS
BREATHING IN
THAT WONDERFUL SCENE
WHAT CAN YOU SAY
TO A PARENT`S LOVE?
THEY WRAP US UP
AND CARE FOR US
THEY GUIDE US THROUGH
SMOOTH AND ROUGH
YOU AIN`T GOT MUCH
IF YOU AIN`T GOT LOVE
PLANTS AND ANIMALS
LIVE SIDE BY SIDE
HELPING THE BEAUTY
OF THE COUNTRY LIFE
YES THIS WORLD IS
FULL OF THINGS
BUILD UP HOPES
AND KEEP ALIVE DREAMS
PART 2 THIS WORLD IS A FUNNY PLACE
WE ARE ALL WRAPPED UP
IN THE HUMAN RACE
WE ALL SHOUT FOR EQUALITY
AS LONG AS THAT WORD
IS FOR YOU AND ME
WE LOOKED AT THE INDIAN
PROUD AND FREE
ROAMING OVER THE PRAIRE
COULDN`T ALLOW THAT,
HAD TO BE TOUGH
THE ONES RUNNING FREE,
HAD TO BE …..US
CHOOSE YOUR RELIGION
CHOOSE IT WELL
STAY ON THE FENCE
BURN IN HELL
TAKE UP THE BANNER
HOLD IT HIGH
CRANK YOUR NECK
TOWARDS THE SKY
THIS WORLD IS A FUNNY PLACE
WE ARE ALL WRAPPED UP
IN THIS BASE OF BASE
TWO WEEKS HOLIDAY
AND THAT IS ALL
THANK YOU FOR THAT
THANK YOU LORD!
TWO WEEKS IN
THE SOUTH OF FRANCE
BACK TO THE FACTORY
AND THE FACTORY DANCE
THIS WORLD IS A FUNNY PLACE.
Comments
adi93ulm Says:
at part 2 ; "COULDN`T ALLOW THAT,
HAD TO BE TOUGH" you sounded a bit off
Anyway I realy liked your song.
10/10
Ow by the way ,at "TWO WEEKS IN
THE SOUTH OF FRANCE
BACK TO THE FACTORY
AND THE FACTORY DANCE" i didnt understand what you mean
Kiwi Tang Says:
Very interesting song, I must say.
SallyMusic Says:
It certainly is a song of two halfs. I like the contrast in the feel and meaning of the words in the two parts, very clever and effective.
Jaxxy Says:
The melody is very repetitive and a little uninteresting without a chorus, but the message there is strong. I can tell you like singing about worldly things.
Nitori Says:
i like the lyrics
Kit Starr Says:
Long song. o:
I like it. c:
POPAROCKA Says:
The songs melody was nostalgic practically and it was so long it actually made me happy. I do agree with Jaxxy o the overall melody but I know the song was about words not melody. Although generally when I think of songs, this just being me I consider both the melody, the lyrics and well almost every aspect twisted together. I like a strong melody and strong words. Good ones generally, I really like the passion you put into this word wise.
Bloodhound Says:
Nice song man. Very nice lyrics.