Mokona Alanza

by Setsuna Toushirou

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Sep 6th 2009
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alanza mokona mokonaalanza tsubasa reservoir chronicle wip
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hey look, she's colored =3
now, the colors aren't final, but this is what i came up with so far ;; should i post other versions too? i'd like feedback on the colors and stuff ;; i dunno, this just...doesn't feel right yet...hmmmmm...

Comments

PattyCakez Says:

The blue gloves just seem not fit at all, it looks werd...o.o"

YoshiTari Soda Says:

D: what's with all of your girl characters having huge bewbs?~

Neo Arcane Says:

Nice...very nice!

TehD Says:

Her eyes are too far apart, and I think they're positioned wrong in general.

I wonder what's keeping up her boobs in that position. The clothes she's wearing doesn't seem strong enough to hold them up that way if they're that big.

TehD Says:

Oh, and the colors are alright, I suppose. Personally, I think the light green beads throw her palette off. She seems generally pink-white-blue pastel based. And the neonish green doesn't really fit well with that.

I'm not one for gloves in that design either, but I think the blue you've used in them kind of throws it off. I'd suggest a lighter blue, or the pink in her outfit so it could match or seem to fit with her general wardrobe. If you get what I mean. C:

lon40 Says:

You did a fantastic job.

jess vs people Says:

Holy boobs batman!