Armpits are up a bit high, and what others said.
Try looking up at a human skeleton, and the muscles, ect. It really helps. It's hard to learn the way the body works, otherwise.
Look where things line up (elbows line up with the top of the hips, and belly button, collar bone lines up with shoulders, ect.).
I really like the eyes and hair though, and the shape given to the stomach.
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GRINACE Says:
body is too streched out, the positiong of the face is akward.
Fyren Says:
Yeah, the chest is a bit long, and methinks the face is off center or something, but other than that i love it
Puffkins Pudikus Says:
Too skinny,face is shaped weird,mouth is too low.
Moo Sensei Says:
Armpits are up a bit high, and what others said.
Try looking up at a human skeleton, and the muscles, ect. It really helps. It's hard to learn the way the body works, otherwise.
Look where things line up (elbows line up with the top of the hips, and belly button, collar bone lines up with shoulders, ect.).
I really like the eyes and hair though, and the shape given to the stomach.
SkyWhiteFox Says:
mm.. agree with Moo Sensei.
He looks a tad bit too skinny xDD Unless you want him to look like Aaron in Out of Control xDDDDD
Make sure the shoulders aren't too square/straight. The chest should be shorter aswell (the pectoral muscles)
Oh.. and the arms :0 they are sooooo skinny :C
I guess he didn't eat anything everyday D:
But the face is well done, not much flaws, just make sure you draw his jaw smoother (it looks kinda wobbly)
One thing's for sure.. the hair is great : D
LEMONcube Says:
its not as wrong as it is awkward.
it doesn't really seem that you've come at it from a "direction"
as always you do nice on hair but the head is a bit big for the body.
and I'm not going to say there is something "wrong" with how skinny it is cause its okay to be thin.
just think proportionally.
the neck is also a little too thick and the breast shouldn't be down so low.
it is weird giving this stuff aaaa ;x;.