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> 'Gay project (WIP)' by Hibari

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Sep 4th 2009
Tags:
wip
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3
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What more should I do with it?


How are my skillz coming along?
Critique pleaaseee

neck is fail

Comments

LEMONcube Says:

the nose is a little off centered but the shading is nice : o

Fell Larka Says:

I love it so far!
For critique, the eyelashes are misplaced; they would be going in the direction the head is going.
The nose might be too low down for it to look normal; or else it would be REALLLY narrow.. :U

bUt yeah!
Its coming along great so farrr!

SkyWhiteFox Says:

mm.. i agree with Fell Larka, but the neck is not fail xD if its a guy make sure you draw the Adam's apple too :C

you should draw a full body of this, it would be nice