Yume's Gift Story (Intro)

by DoomTH

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Yume's Gift Story (Intro)

“Three Months ago we were Unknown to each other, now it Seems As though we are so Close to each other, It’s amazing” Said one with three claw like Scars Scrapped down his Face as a Blond Girl Smiled “It does, Well I Suppose We Are Siblings” as The other Said “Now Yume, We are Not Siblings, We only Consider Ourselves as Siblings” as She Replied “Which is Exactly Why I Call you my brother Doom” As She Hugged him, without a Hug Back as Doom Checked on his Computer for anything to see he had a Message from the Government, Which Caught him to a Surprise as He Read Aloud “Yes We Know you Are a Class S Criminal, But We Consider this Job too Great For anyone Else, SO Please Accept this Job, We offer you $1,000,000” as Doom sighed “Do you think that a lot of Money Would Have Convinced Me? I would need more” as he Soon Got a Reply and Yume Looked over his Shoulder as the Message then Read “We’ll offer you and anyone one else you would like 50 days of No Police” As Doom Considered it and got asked from Yume “What are you gonna Do, Bro?” as Doom Sighed “I’ll Do it”, Replying Back “Well Fine, But what’s this Job?” and Got a message Back “We Got Some Intel that an old Orphanage has been Abandoned for at least 30 years but recent Sightings Believes that there are Children in there, go in there and Find out why they are there as Doom Stood Up, Putting on his Cloak, Putting in their weapon holders His Claws and His Broadsword as Yume Shuddered “I-I’m Coming with you” as Doom looked Back “Why, you could Get Seriously Hurt in this” as Yume Hugged him “I Don’t want you Hurt Doom” as Doom Nodded Alright then as Yume and Doom Went out of his house and Into the forest”

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Aug 31st 2009
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This Is the Intro of My Sister 's welcome back gift, a Month late, but no one's perfect

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Shadowelite Says:

If you don't mind me saying, I like the story, sure not everyones perfect. I completly agree no one can be perfect but every so often we can offer help to those around us. So i'd just like to say could you put paragraphs in this? would make it more easy to read

Anyway now that thats out of the way, I like the plot. I wonder why there are kids there and why the goverment would be willing to pay $1,000,000 just to do a recon mission ¬¬ should prove intresting. Anyway a very good story. Keep it up ^^