The Pretense (New Inspiration)

by totorofan

in Pre-writing Story Inspirations

The Pretense (New Inspiration)

CAMELIA ANABELLE LEROUE never wanted to be a lady. Born into a rich house with a mother who loved most to flaunt her prettiest gowns and attract eyes, Camelia stood no chance of saying so. It wasn’t until her mother remarried into money and called a carriage for her to be sent to a Lady’s Etiquette boarding school that Camelia ever took a stand.

In order to protect herself in her travels far away from home, Camelia took the disguise of a young boy using her brother’s clothes. She set off for a long dreamed-of land known as North Courtier, in hopes of finding her rightful place there. But she never expected to be saved from an accidental scuffle by a strange man, mistaken for an actual boy, and asked for her apprenticeship in return, no questions asked.

Now, in order to keep safe in a new and strange land the man brought her to, Camelia must continue her apprenticeship in disguise, amongst his many cats and visiting ladies who, strangely enough, find Camelia attractive.

Escaping lady travelers, tidying after cats, and bending to the every whim of this outrageous man and his NoForm companion…Camelia believes it’s hardly bearable. But secrets and mystery tales of this stranger keep her interest alive as she continues to pay him back for rescuing her. And what harm could poking around for the truth do?

Involve her in a war beyond her understanding and everything she ever believed in? She certainly thought not.

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Aug 28th 2009
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fantasy humour
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THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE HILARIOUS.
Just warning you. I don't usually write all the way through humour stories, but I thought it would be nice if I could retreat from the dark lovestories every now and then and write something funny and magical to reboost my spirits. :3
Whoo!
I hope you like it and I hope it sparks your interests. :> It's written in Camelia's POV (AKA Basil as she meets the stranger, because she obviously needs a boy name for a boy disguise), but this is more of a BOTB thing. ^^
I wasn't sure about the title though. Suggestions? Or do you like it?

ENJOY

Comments

KakumeyKaguya Says:

I can't wait to read the first chapter! 8D

MUHDKIPZ Says:

OMGEYEKANTWAYT!!!
did u update it here first or did i see it first?
have a cookie since i cant go to krispy kreme this late

pur plec loud Says:

Ooooooooh I will read it for sure. Funny and magical is always AWESOME .

Neji Luver101 Says:

I like the title :) And it sounds good; lol, I love funny stories