Copy Pasta from Fiend's fridge:
Next page! HOOHAH! Now to start drawing that other tard that shows up from time to time!
Orginally I was going to have Bleed in the 2nd pannel say something along the lines of, "A LONE PERSON SHOULDN'T LEAVE THE HOUSE WITHOUT PROTECTION~" Or something like that to help show that Bleed had that sword all along. I get really paranoid that I'm not showing enough to my audience, that while i'm going, "FUCK YEAH THIS TENSION IS AWESOME!" they're going, "ummm what?"
In other news, I've always had issues with backgrounds, and I'm working on doing better with them. I think I did alright on this page. The bottom pannel looks pretty good to me. Also in the bottom pannel, Bleed is thinking that maybe public violence MAY have been a bad idea.
Not important but in the center pannel, the mohawk guy reveals why he was defending the crazy old preacher~
For the whole comic it is here
My site: http://www.freewebs.com/ruckntrigger/index.htm
Drunk Duck:
http://www.drunkduck.com/OrLane/
and Fiend's Fridge:
http://www.fiendsfridge.com/users/trigger/
Bleed and Orlane (c) That Trigger/Ruck character
Comments
cideon Says:
I think you did fine with Bleed putting the sword away. If she'd not had it, she wouldn't be able to slip it away so easily. And because you can only see part of it, you would think (well I do anyway) that it's like a habit, so no fuddling fingers or anything like that :]
I like that bottom panel too, though to me it seemed like half regret too maybe. Then again Bleed could just haul ass outta there going all "OHSHIT OHSHIT WASN'T ME! *zoom*"