Don't you just love it when inspiration just hits you outta nowhere?
I was having a horrible art block today, but whilst listening to
This song right here, an image just suddenly popped into my head! I wanted a fading away type of thing, but not your average fade away. This came into my head and came out just about EXACTLY how I wanted it to be.
I want Criticism please. I won't answer to just silly comments.
Comments
Fanime234 Says:
[insert silly comment] Haha
I love how the "fading away" part came out :) I don't like how the hand part of the fading out part came out, though. You get the fading away feeling by splitting one part into several, right? so when you only have one "fading piece" for each finger it looks a bit odd. The hand and the foreshortening came out great, though!~ The clothes feel like clothes, and thats a good thing. I don't really like how the eye came out though. It feels like it doesn't have enough "support". If you add another line or so to the upper lid of the eye, it'll feel less... shaky. I really like how the hair came out too.The only problem I have with it is the ponytail to my left. To be honest, it looks a little bit like a fox tail. If you put more strands of hair in the picture and make it less chunky, and add a bit more detail, the hair will come off as more fluid and will be more impressive. Overall a pretty interesting concept and nice improving art :)
totorofan Says:
The torso seems just a little too long based on where the skirt begins, but beside that it looks pretty good. :3 I like your clothing style, and the fading technique is really neat and creative. I also love and envy how you can draw HANDS
You draw them so amazingly!
Very good job overall; I think it'll look great when you color it (if you're going to and all) ;D
Masked Kitty Says:
Well ok besides what's been said, I'm gonna say that peace-sign hand pose is just horribly overdone, and it doesn't really support the idea that she's disappearing, I'd go more for a reaching pose or a waving one. I feel like her eyebrow is far too high up, but it shouldn't even show anyway because of the hair, I'd suggest showing part of her forehead and lowering the eyebrow so it can go together better. I'm gonna have to disagree with fanime on the eye though, I like how it came out, but I feel the actual issue is that it lacks enough emotions. I'd actually say just turn the lower eyelid up more to show she's not entirely happy about this. On a last note, this is a very nice picture and you did a wonderful job.
Neji Luver101 Says:
The fingers on the hand that's fading away look a bit funky to me, but that's probably just 'cause they're fading away, which the whole fading away thing is awesome 8D And I really, really evny your skill at drawing hands :)))) boooooooot, the two fingers that're down on the right hand should be tucked under the thumb, I think. Otherwise, fabulous, fabulous work
Jogemu Says:
I'd say make the direction of the fades all the same, and perhaps some parts of it already gone such as the hand, because at this rate it kinda looks like she's transforming into a digital version of her complete self instead of actually fading.
Also her body may be too long if you look at the length of the arm, which is supposed to reach at least beyond the hips.
Kai Uchiha Says:
blah blah blah I like this. I'm sure you've had enough critic on this.