SUSPENSE!!
Muahaha, I like this page the best so far because of the suspense...and the chibi
Only critique, would be to add some shock lines or something around the eye so we know it just opened. Try and imagine every reader is retarded and you have to spell everything out.
That's what my English teacher taught me. I may have paraphrased a bit, but you know what I mean. ~
Other than that this is lookin' good
Keep up the great work~
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Moo Sensei Says:
SUSPENSE!!
Muahaha, I like this page the best so far because of the suspense...and the chibi
Only critique, would be to add some shock lines or something around the eye so we know it just opened. Try and imagine every reader is retarded and you have to spell everything out.
That's what my English teacher taught me. I may have paraphrased a bit, but you know what I mean. ~
Other than that this is lookin' good
Keep up the great work~
Tuyuq Vampram Says:
Our first moment of blunt exclamation. Let us pause for a moment to treasure this moment.
... moment's over. Movin' on.