The Witness

by oneshot

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The Witness

Would you like to hear what knowledge of the world I've seen? Would you like to see and feel the things I saw? Listen and I'll tell you what I've seen. I have seen the rape and beating of men, women,children. I've seem soldiers die, gutted like a fish by bullets and ash.
I've seen the torture of both the wicked and innocent. I saw knights and warriors alike die horrid deaths. Whether it be from diseases, infected wounds or by the sword itself. I saw a man's heart torn from his chest. I saw children watching their families tortured in front of their eyes. A man is in a room with this girl tied up to bed posts. He both beat her and raped her. A mall boy stood silently outside the door to see all of this occur. I stood and watched the little boy. I saw all these things and more within a flash of ten minutes or so. I am a witness to man's cruelty. After seeing all these things I wondered to myself, where god was. Then I thought that perhaps I was meant to see these things to inspire me to change the world. Like a message from god. To this day I still don't know or have an answer. But I do know that I want to try to prevent as much of this as I can. I know the task at hand is a challenge but if life was easy then the rewards of happiness and the path traveled to look back and see how much you have accomplished become worthless. If I should fail then let another pick up from where I had fallen and continue to pass a torch of faith through generations to come in hopes of some kind of success.

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Aug 10th 2009
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One day at a random moment a flood of images came to my head. I saw past, present and possible future events. Though it could well be my imagination I both saw and heard everything right in front of me though I could not move to help. That day my outlook on things changed. All I know is that I want to do some amount of good in this world before I pass on. It matters not what you may think of this writing. I just had to write it to get it out of my system.

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Bozo Says:

It is nice sentiment, a little naive,but definitely nice. Thats gutted by the way, not gut. As I have told you before,I like your writing.Keep it up.

Pani Pony999 Says:

Wow.....this one is REALLY good.....I can't really find my self to like one part of it....I like it completely.....

Very nice job

Firebane Yamaneko Says:

I've had the same thing happen to me before (the past regressions and such, I mean) and it's how many of my stories are inspired... but this. Wow. Very dramatic, I admit I agree with Bozo though. It seems like a courageous thought but very nearly impossible to just walk out and accomplish. Great job as a whole!