Hey guys, this is for an album cover I'm making for a friend, but I just need some input
Does this look ok? I mean shape wise, I feel the arms and shoulders are too stiff, I dunno, what do you think?
The completed cover is her standing on a meteor in space, among the stars in space
PLEASE HALP
Comments
knight block Says:
It looks plain, but I suppose that is because it is only lineart. I really look forward to what this is going to turn out to be! Good luck!
giascle Says:
Way too stiff; bring her shoulders down, and no animu boobs please. Also her feet are just weird.
Erase the feet, redraw them coming forward more.
POPAROCKA Says:
I wholesomely agree with Giascle and Jelix.. The feet are my biggest point out. I think if they were pulled forward they would look better. Try looking in the mirror at how your feet look in socks, that's generally very helpful to me trying to draw at least for my style. *shrugs* Like it though, the motion and concept of this is unique to your style I think.
The Mobile Sponge Says:
Well there supposed to me spread apart, to make her look flat-footed about her surroundings, but I just can't get them the way I drew them on paper
Legs should be a bit wide as her hips are so wide.