Using Love...

by Mangacritic001

in Other

Using Love...

He helped her with all his might,
But she never saw with her sight,
That all the good he meant,
All came from just one vent,
He did it all from his heart,
But she never saw that part,
He threw away his life,
So she could be some random guy's wife,
He's gone now,
You wanna know how?
She used him like a knife,
To take his own God forsaken life,
She gave him that blade,
As her memories of him began to fade,
She now knows what she did,
She saw a life and took a bid,
It's unknown whether she really cared,
Even with the friendship they shared,

He loved her to death and would die to make her happy,
She was selfish, only used him, and let that happen...

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Jul 30th 2009
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using love
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I made this last night, although I have been wanting to make it for quite a bit now, some of you may have an idea on what it's about... You don't, trust me! XD Only I know what it's about... XP
Anyway, it was hard as hell to set the rhyming up, but I was freaking amazed by how it came out, I love it! ^^ It was supposed to be a bit different, it's different from what the story was originally a bit, but, oh well, I still think it's great! I think this is my best piece! :D
Anyway, enjoy, please review and comment! :D

Comments

Dezzy Says:

wow I love it ^-^ it's really good.

DarthShako Says:

that is amazing.
That was a pleasure to read.

I might have an idea but it's probably wrong...

lostinthepast69 Says:

its really good and i probably know whats it about

Tockeru L Avian Says:

This is pretty good and detailed ^^
I like it

Tockeru L Avian Says:

Comment, lol