Lost

by DarthShako

in Poetry

Lost

I'm tongue tied
I'm lost for words
I'm lost in the words for you
I'm lost for you

The rose is the North Star,
To find your light
It guides me to you
I follow the rose,
to see true love

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Jul 22nd 2009
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Sorry, I couldn't think of an interesting title.

I'd like to thank my good friend [u=Tau22], he helped me greatly with figuring out how to write the poem

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DarkRyuukin Says:

My opinion... you wanted cold hard truth eh?
its nice... a bit short though... I dislike the rose part a bit, I'm not sure why.

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