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A Sound in the Silence Ch.1
Nisame! Run! But mother what about you!The spirits are coming,forget about me just run!Ok but I will come back for you.There he is! Said the spirits.Get Him!!Aaahhh.tht sword,said one of the spirits.It is so powerful.
13 years later.Slash!Nisame’s blade cut the spirits head off.There are many spirits in this area.Nonetheless. I will kill them all.Nisame’s blade went right into the spirits heart.he is too powerful!said one of the spirits.No.Please.aaahhh!!!Easy enough.Apparently evil spirits could take on human forms too.But they can’t fool me.(as Nisame walks down a trail)Are you the great spirit hunter Nisame!?Who the hell are you.I’m Seroth.I want to become your apprentice.You think you can just walk right up to me and think I will take you as my apprentice.Yes,said Seroth.Where are your parents.said Nisame.I lost them to evil spirits…Oh well do you have any sword experience at all.Yes!said Seroth.This is my sword.It’s wooden,said Nisame.Your point.You can’t kill anything with that.
How about this.Lets make you a sword.Sweet,said Seroth.I have this friend that is a good blacksmith.
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Comments
Keldorix Says:
pretty cool dude. great concept but you're forgetting quotation marks, structure and description... if ed and i can come over i'll be more than happy to help you.