white witch 2

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Jul 17th 2009

Tags:: white winter witch
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this is a remake of my "white witch". I've always wanted to do this because the first one was really sloppy, i didn't do enough cleaning job, this lineart was blurry, not enough shading... so on. the lineart was just a shot from my camera and not scanned so it's blurry. so i was pretty amazed when it was quite well received. (well... honestly it looked pretty to me then. now.. umm..)

now, i tried my best to make this look a lot prettier than the first one.. honestly i really think that the eyes turned out well. i took out the bits of details on the dress to make it look cleaner, but then probably it's a bad move since the it kinda looks blank now. well, i still like this one better~

if you want to see how it looked before, here's the link:
http://sheezyart.com/art/view/966903/

Comments

PattyCakez Says:

I really like the clothing is nice, the folds are subtle but enought to make a difference, she has a calm look from her eyes and the coloring is subtle but outstanding. The only thing that looks akward is the hat, I really can't say what it is, but it keeps pulling my attention from the whole piece.

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Fanime234 Says:

Agreed with above comment I actually didn't even notice the hat xD But once I did, it does look out of place. When you have a hat on, it takes up a signifigant amount of space on your head--or it simply won't stay on. I think we shouldn't be able to see her bands with this sort of a hat on--or something. But yeah, great work! I think the designs should've been kept, but honestly, this is such a great pic C: