Unlikely Ch. 1 (Part One)

by jack h

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Unlikely Ch. 1 (Part One)

A velvety, powerful voice called a name into the softly shaded forest clearing.

Fallon Markel Malikov.

A man emerged from a dark corner and kneeled before the voice’s owner, a woman who was seated in a knobby throne of branches that seemed to have bent into the throne shape of their own free will. The man was worn, tired, and his looked was at least ten years out of date. Considering that he couldn’t remember the last time he’d owned something new, let alone ventured into the city on his own time, it wasn’t surprising. He didn’t look up, but replied with a simple, “Yes?”

She sat with a posture that was too perfect and said, “We have found the heir.”

The man’s smile was too grim to even be a smile. “Let me guess,” he said, tilting his head down just enough that his old, fraying top hat shielded his eyes, “you’re sending me.” Despite what he’d said, there was no guess in his tone. He’d been at this game too long not to know what the woman before him would do.

Nevertheless, she chuckled and responded, “But of course. After all, this is what I’ve needed you for all along. And who knows? Maybe you’ll find who you’re looking for, too.”

He turned his face up and narrowed his eyes at her for a quick second. “Knowing you, it’s doubtful,” he said as he stood and turned away in one fluid motion.

However, he hadn’t gotten far when the woman grinned slyly and said, “Oh, Fallon, I almost forgot.”

He looked back and scowled. “What?”

The woman lifted a cane with ornately carved details in its handle from the ground beside her and tossed it to him. He caught it deftly, but the moment it touched his hand, his left leg suddenly gave out, and he crumpled to the ground in pain.

With a derisive sneer, the woman purred, “Be yourself.”

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Jul 5th 2009
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Whoa. I actually uploaded something. Crazy, right?

Anyway, I started writing Unlikely again and finally scrapped that shitty beginning. I still don't like the first line, but whatever.

This will be uploaded in parts. It isn't written that way, but whenever I think I've reached a good point and length to post it, I will. Next up involves Shali preparing for his final day of school and being kidnapped rather rudely. It's fun.

Anyone that knows Fallon knows (sort of) what happened at the end there. For those that don't, Fallon has an injured leg. I'm thinking muscle got ripped out years ago, but I'm not exactly sure. Either way, he can't walk without a cane--sort of. I won't go into it now, because it gets explained later, but he's basically regaining his disability at the end.

So...yeah. Oh, you'll also noticed I changed Fallon's name. Yeah. LeHarle was too annoying to say and I just didn't like it. It was mostly given to him because of Grungeville, and Jack being his sister and everything, but then that story was killed. So.

Unlikely, Fallon, MYSTERIOUS WOMAN and all that jazz (c) C. Gregory 2006-2009

I swear to fuck I'll kill anyone that steals this. I REALLY DO.

Comments

pur plec loud Says:

Good beginning, yes, one of your best I think.

zealotscout Says:

Seems interesting man , I'd like to see more from you .

Reen Says:

Iiiiiinteresting
I hope these random inclinations to post occur more often, because I miss Fallon and Shali. XD



JUST DON'T KILL ME FOR "STEALING" WHEN THE NAME "MARKAL" SUDDENLY APPEARS IN CYCLONE.
Isn't even spelled the same, so there.