|
|
The Tale of Two - Angel of Escape
I awaken to what sounds like thunder.
They are evacuating, for enemy troops have advanced close nearby.
Everything is blurry and in slow motion.
I see everyone panicking to escape.
Patients are left behind along with bloodied half finish operations.
With all my strength I try to summon myself to my feet so that I may escape as well.
As soon as I stand I quickly fall down.
My chest starts to bleed, and as I look up I see a woman's face.
She help's me up and walks me to a truck that is taking all the soldiers.
But, the moment I saw her face it looked just like her. Like my lovely Nicole.
Like an angel who rescued me I spoke weakly and asked her for her name.
I don't believe she heard me.
She hands me over to a group of men near the truck and they hall me in.
Staring out the back I see building ablaze and crumbling.
The screams of the dying and the dead who were left inside being burnt alive can be heard clearly.
I shed tears and watch many people die as the truck starts up and heads on it's way in a rush.
God, where are you? Do you see the carnage that man has wrought upon himself?
Why don't you do anything to help?
Just as I had questioned a man behind me asked me how the hell I managed the strength to get to the truck.
He said that he saw me in there earlier and that I looked half dead.
I relied saying that the nurse that handed me over to you guys helped.
He said that there was no nurse, that I had miraculously made to the truck by myself.
No nurse......could it have been.....an angel?
|
|
Comments
NtRamen Says:
Very Well done
p i m p hollistic Says:
; ///////// ;
Keldorix Says:
that's awesome dude, bravo
AndyXP Says:
It's pretty good, the details are nice and pretty simple, and I like the concept.
But of course I don't like the inclusion of your girlfriend, since it just sounds really forced and unoriginal.
Y'should work on that.
Pani Pony999 Says:
*crying* so sad and beautiful! T~T

I love it!