I don't think she noticed the "evil" part.
Sorry for the quality, but I switched over to a new style. Usually it's a lot cleaner than this, but these are just little shorts anyway so as long as it gets the point across, then it doesn't matter.
Anyway, again this idea comes from the lovely people at Vampirely. In this particular case, there were about a dozen comments branching off of one idea, focused primarily on this genius example of SMeyer writing:
“Aro started to laugh. “Ha, ha, ha,” he chuckled.”
After which followed a slew of disbelief and enjoyable fun. I was almost in tears. Not only because of this poor excuse of writing but also because it was just. Too. Hilarious.
As Android 21 observed:
“Moreover, it requires commas? Did the red squiggly line bother her so much that she simply couldn’t ignore it?”
Apparently.
Twilight (c) SMeyer
Twilite (c) MC Paul
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