my dark passion

by kravenariess

in pems and stuff

my dark passion

In the dark I hide.
My only one caring thing, it carries me to my room
Its sets me down gently to put me to sleep,
Nothing has ever cared for me so much
Its waves of long blonde hair, float over my skin to caress me
Its long fingers brush my arm gently
The lips of the darkness come so willingly yet hesitate
The eyes see everything about me I have never told
I wish for its lips to touch mine for the pleasure that it gives
The hands move briskly over me creating a fire of great lust
My hands grad hold of the bed my back arches and I breathe
I cannot hope for more, my sweet darkness holds me close
It takes my breath with every whispered promise
It promises me to live me passionately to give my last refuge
I seek nothing other then the deep green of its eyes
I cry in passion and lust hoping for more.
I crave the weight of the darkness on me
The pressure of its hips towards mine
My body shakes for nothing other then what it can give
With a knock on the door my beloved darkness disappears
The door burst open and slams against the wall my family
Has come to see what has happened.
My body covered in cuts and scratches.
I try to control the uncanny need to cry
The family leaves me in shame.
I start to feel lonely again, I whisper for my darkness
I hope for his return.
The light begins to crawl through.
I see my beloved again. It gives me throes of pleasure
It gives me enough to last he day
The darkness cradles me in its arms kissing gently yet fiercely
The sun finally comes through he stay a moment longer.
He gives me pleasure again.
He walks to the darkness and disappears
My only love, the beloved darkness
He my dark angel will come again, I will be ready.
For I am his dark haired love and he my blonde lover.
He will come to claim his passion once again.
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Mature Jun 12th 2009
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darkness love poem
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okay so yea. this was my dream last night nad i felt inspired to write it. i also want to give this as a present to http://akane801.sheezyart.com/ because i am stil working on a request of his.. so hopefully akane like it!...

hope you do to.

let me know if you think this is mature content. so that way i can edit it.!

please crituqe i would really aprciate it.
anything and everyting you ave top say is helpful!

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Akane801 Says:

I do think it need mature content, just so that people won't say anything that might get you in trouble. Ok! This is very nice! I really liked it, though I got confused at the last part, but no problem! Keep up the good work!^3^

Anthropophagi Says:

I made a few revisions. Hopefully it's of help to you (:

I hide in the dark.
1 single room, only one laptop, one, do one of the following.
Quiet sleep
I am most interested in
Heart and stroke long waves of blond hair and your skin type
Stroking his long arms and fingers
In the darkness of the lips still feel happy to come
If necessary, please make sure you do not please me all the news.
So many people in order to provide contact information to me, many people's lips is very exciting and, unlike
My hand to move aggressively, is to create a large fire.
In order to maintain the arch of my hand back to school for breathing in bed
I have it in the dark, my sweet life
It takes my breath every whispered promise
To provide a place to escape the promise at the end of my life is hard
I do not want any other deep green eyes
To increase my passion and desire to cry.
Long was the darkness of my weight
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I need to knock on the door of the dark
My family is planning to open a door or wall and burst
Now, please do not please. Please please. Happened.
My body was covered with cuts and scratches.
I must try to control the mysterious cry
Unfortunately, members of my family yet.
The darkness of my solitude, again, I started to feel whisper
I return to him.
Light begins to crawl through.
Back to the top is my beloved. It gives me pleasure suffering
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Cradle, a soft kiss to the depth of my soul, is his weapon
After the last day of vacation today.
He gives me joy.
He walks in the dark
My only love, the darkness of the beloved
His Dark Angel, again, I am ready to do something.
For me, his black hair and blonde girlfriend is in love with him.
He has claimed his passion again.