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Life poem
Life is a long dark corridor
with stained glass windows casting
down the soft light from heaven.
life is an unread book, laying
forgotten by the unlit candle.
Nothing is for certain as you
pace lonely ahead.
words only become clearer by light
as the pages turn slowly and softly.
Life is riddled with obstacles
becoming a steep hill and then
next a rollarcoaster, uncontrollable
yet influnced.
life is a lively and crowded area to
a lonely quiet beach
First you're surrounded,
then you're stranded
Life is a large ocean
and everything occupies it with you
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Comments
WalkingDisaster777 Says:
This is wonderful, ahh! It makes me so happy to see a person write such lovely poetry!
But...
DUDE!!! THERE'S SO MANY SPELLING ERRORS AND YOU FORGOT SPACES!!!!
...*twitch*
Sora Envy Girl Says:
ohhhh wow this one is my favorite out of all of them! its well written, annnd, its SO TRUE xD