Wow never thought I'd be putting one of these up, but I felt like it so yeah. These are just some quick sketches done mostly at school. I attempted trying the whole "cartoon" style a couple times, not sure if I like it or not

And Herb the zombie made it in there too (yeah he actually has both arms in that picture). Rest assured I'm working on something better right now but for now this will have to do

You guys are welcome to critique, as always :) Score is disabled because this is just a sketch dump.
Comments
KyoKuddler Says:
HERRRRRRBBBBBBBBBBB!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GAWD!!!!~!!! I'VE MISSED YOU SOOO MUUUCHHHHH!!!!!! *sobs*
Kibas Girl Says:
I like the cartoon style a lot ^-^
And Herb looks lovely X3
Also the picture on the lower left with the bats, I can never get that angle and you did it quite well
Fanime234 Says:
Lookin' good
I loooooove the teeth and nostrils, the word has never been so fitting before, on the creature (sewer dweller, right?) in the lower right corner. Needless to say, that pic with the chick and the bats is amazing and I don't see much of anything wrong with it. (the spike foreshortening is pretty awesome) One thing I noticed with all of these pictures is the lack of ears (most of them the hair cover it, but on the bat one, there are headphones covering them. I know you love music and headphones, but if it keeps you away from practicing those ears you might need to take a break from them. I know I can't draw ears for crap, but I just felt this was worth pointing out
On the sewer dweller it looks like you started working on an ear and then stopped. Also, I've noticed that the stripes on your cartoony characters don't "wrap" around the body. You can hold a shirt on a hanger with stripes and they're straight, but when you put it on a person it tends to "wrap" around. If you curve your stripes around the body I think it may add more dimension. I can see you curving them a little, but the girl with the hat's left arm and leggings was the part that was bugging me. (Of course, I could see you making them straight on purpose to make it more cartoony, but I can't be sure) Anyhow, great work! I can definitely see you improving and I gotta say its fun to watch!
Aang7Mali Says:
I'm sorry i not gonna critize your sketchs but i just wanted to annouce that Herb is freakin radical
Kai Uchiha Says:
OH MY GOD. THAT SEWER DWELLER IS GONNA EAT MY FACE. Along with Herb. But that's ok~