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Do you?
Tell me,
how it’s like,
to live in there.
In this broken mirror.
I know,
I never spoke
about my wasted dreams,
But I forgave myself.
Will you,
let me stay?
I won’t run away.
I won’t run away again.
Why not?
You keep asking,
well... maybe just because,
I finally know my name.
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Comments
Luke Anime Says:
Wow.. that was so good ^^ Think that would make a good little song :)
vampire Miyu Says:
nice and deep poem as usual
and my interpretation of it its that it's a discussion of someone who has a split personality
what's yours?
JelmerBV Says:
It's not really encouraging to know that it will probably take a some time [=understatement] before you will reply to this comment, if you will ever. (Unless it's accidentally on top of your updates list and you feel like directly answering that is.)
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Anyway, I guess I can give it a try. (Hoping that you will, one day, return the favor and comment on one of my uploads
Miyu said split personality...
Sounds close, but I don't think that's it.
It would be... too easy in this case.
(Yes, you wanted an interpretation, so you get one, no matter how long it will be
Hmmm...
I slightly think about forgiving yourself.
Finally facing hidden feelings, sadness.
Yes, I think I'll stick with a poem about a person who finally forgave him or herself.
Finally thinking about him/herself again.
Something like that.
(This isn't an easy one to interpret, there are so many things in those simple looking rows.)
Forgiveness which causes the person to finally know him/herself again? (It's hard to find the right words for what I'm trying to say; maybe I should write a poem about it...
I also do recognize my own feelings in some parts of the poem...
Ah, well, I guess this comment is long enough know. (Wow, this really became a pretty long one
Anyway; how close am I by the original meaning of it?
(What did you want this poem to mean?)
SaisCy Says:
I could give an interpetation right now but it would be awkward and stuff
So I'll just stick to announcing that I really really like it!
PSangel Says:
It is raelly nice and deep. I agree with Luke; it could be a nice song Im already sitting here and experimenting a bit.(shh)
I'm glad to see another of your poems, you sure have imprived since I first met you. Keep on writing and sharing.
Jasuperu Says:
Like luke anime said, it's almost like a songtekst. Really awesome!