Rain

As the water from the sky hits my skin, I can feel the spirits of the lost, souls that were once loved and living, as I feel them running down my skin, I can feel them going through me, speaking to me, all telling me something different... But after a hard day’s work, the one that speaks out the loudest, is the one saying “Good job”, that is the voice that makes you smile in the end, not just because you said it to yourself as well, but because you heard it from another voice, and a voice that you remember at that...

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May 17th 2009
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Okay, I made this last night, I heard it raining, and decided to go and stand out in the rain, and this came to mind... I was just standing there, in just a tank top and boxers (sorry for those who didn't need to know that, ^^;), and this came to mind... So I went back to my room and wrote this ^^
And, by the ending part, about it being the one you remember, it's supposed to mean that out of all the voices, you found one that was one of your family/friends...
Also, the hard day's work part was because I worked really hard yesterday, check my journal on why ^^;
Please review and comment! ^^

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yumi56 Says:

:-3 amazing hun

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