Fish vs Sword Concept: Revival

by Syco

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May 14th 2009
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Not bad for a dead guy, huh?
Some explanation is needed!
At one point, I wanted my char to die, but revive. I never got to write, nor got permission to do so. Since I know I'm not gonna write the whole thing, I'll put a brief summary of what I wanted to happen here.
At the battle of (INSERT BATTLEFIELD HERE), Danny grew weary of the death he was causing, wanting to create peace. He had forgotten the reason he was fighting in the first place. He had met someone peculiar, who questioned his morals. The words of that wo/man slowly began to shake his very soul during the battle, and ultimately joined a small resistance from the local populace of (INSERT TOWN HERE). Hearing of this, Allan was sent to bring some sense to Danny. After a long talk, Danny was not swayed, warning his friend if he would not move, he would remove him. After a long and disheartening battle, Allan reluctantly gave the order to open fire. Danny took countless arrows to the body, but made a final mad dash towards his friend. Allan lifted his spear and pierced Danny's heart. "Thank you." were his last words. He let the others of the resistance go without a fight. After the battle was (WON/LOST), Allan took Danny's body to the (INSERT LAND HERE) forest, and buried it there. Only a day had passed, and as Allan went to inspect the grave site to give his final farewells, he had seen that the grave had been ransacked.
Now a man has been seen wandering (INSERT COUNTRYSIDE HERE). His mind was clouded. His memories of a family were an illusion, a figure had been controlling his thoughts. He now seeks the forgiveness of the Dreadfish.
Would they?

It should be noted that his moniker was going to be "Danny the Lucky" because of the sheer amount of dumb luck he had at times of great need. In reality, it was supposed to be the work of his guardians, whom many reported seeing protecting him, though he himself never did (until the event above, where the male guardian gave his soul to revive Danny). For obvious reasons, this never came to fruition, though it's not like ever SUBMITTED ANYTHING HA HA HA.
As you can see, a small change face-wise, and he now carries a gunblade. I'll try and see if I can find a way to explain THAT. <.<
Also, I'd like a recap of who's in charge, what's going to happen now etc., if anyone would be so kind. If the leaders or anyone else have a problem (and I'm sure you will) with this "newish" bio, please tell me how to fix it. :)

Comments

Syco Says:

Forgive me if you don't want me in the Dreadfish. :P

Seancicle Says:

Very interesting back story, I always love reading these things. Though one issue is that in the dreadfish you can't have a sword as a weapon. You may have a dagger, but only as a secondary weapon. Sorry to have to tell you that but you'll have to either find another weapon or join the sword/swordfish.

SHiDa Says:

Seancicle is right. We dreadfish are not primary sword users, if we cherished the sword we would be swords or swordfish. (The entire community war started over a silly argument about whether fish or swords were better). We make use of other more darkly based things - Dark Arts, Gruesome Weapons and Highly Technological Warfare.

An update on the situation - High Commander Ota has been killed. Warchief Yue has taken his position as High Commander, and appointed Captain Shida (er - me I guess) as the new Warchief. Fish Leader Vensy and Sword Leader Webs have vanished after a particular violent battle. Things are slowly coming back together but what is going to happen next is anyone's guess.

((PS: It was I who took issue a while back with the surge of people in the Dreads being revived as sentient beings (after Onislize's story) - it's not as pretty as you think (should look at Captain Oni - only kept stabilised by the very armour he wears) and its a drain and curse on on the necromancers who perform it.))