I'm gonna have quite a payday after this.
You're no doubt either a Sonic OC, or someone who recently played Sonic and the Black Knight.
I hate OC's because they always seem to think they're creative and popular, they almost seem like a cult. But beyond that we get to the disgusting, middle layer, that is the goo of filth called your picture.
Obviously you've got smooth lines, but that doesn't make it less than obvious you're new to whatever program you're using. And whether or not you actually tried, more effort and time, and some major shading, is needed to make this picture seem cool.
Granted the pose is nice, you got that down, but his shape like body does ruin that. Focus on practicing this character and maybe even make an original and creative one.
And then get back to me with an "in-your-face" comment.
Once again, Kaitos, i'll have to do criticism on this
picture that you call an update.(I'm not trying to be an asshole)
I like the pose, that is granted, and the design of the character isn't that bad, but the skill of drawing in the character needs to improve.
The sword looks like it was slapped on at the last minute, it is not how a sword should be. If you want any help on swords, take a tutorial or once again, try to look in a book, manual, or other picture.
Your character's face need to improve. It looks like his eyes are miniature black holes. The hands look like he only has three fingers, his index finger, his ring finger, and his thumb. The gloves could be better, but there are open lines in the picture and they need to be shaded in and checked on, because people will take notice of it.
The pants look very skinny and look like they will
hurt your legs. The pants need detail, like my
pants, they always have detail, and the shoes, once
again, they have open lines and those also looked
like they were slapped on at the last minute.
The ears don't even remotely look like ears(i know
Sonic has those ears, but you get it). They look
like extra spikes, so you could really improve on
the ears, because they don't have any detail.
I like the shirt design, but open lines ruin it.
I also see a white spot in the middle of your arm-
and-elbow area. That is unacceptable. People will
not approve of it and will try to harass you.
Overall, you really need to focus. The pose is
pretty good, the shirt design is Ok, the shading
sucks, the pants look half-assed, the sword doesn't
even look like a sword, the shoes aren't very
good, the gloves aren't very good either, the belt
is fair, but the white lines and open lines really
bring down the picture. The sword looks like a
long, curved beak. You better reply if you like
Constructive Criticism, because if you think this
is one of the best drawings you've ever done,
we REALLY need to talk privately. Case closed.
Comments
I'm gonna have quite a payday after this.
You're no doubt either a Sonic OC, or someone who recently played Sonic and the Black Knight.
I hate OC's because they always seem to think they're creative and popular, they almost seem like a cult. But beyond that we get to the disgusting, middle layer, that is the goo of filth called your picture.
Obviously you've got smooth lines, but that doesn't make it less than obvious you're new to whatever program you're using. And whether or not you actually tried, more effort and time, and some major shading, is needed to make this picture seem cool.
Granted the pose is nice, you got that down, but his shape like body does ruin that. Focus on practicing this character and maybe even make an original and creative one.
And then get back to me with an "in-your-face" comment.
SDS123 Says:
i think he has than he thinks he's got. Besides he is very tactical
Yoshi1x8 Says:
not bad
1+
CrimsonFire88 Says:
Once again, Kaitos, i'll have to do criticism on this
picture that you call an update.(I'm not trying to be an asshole)
I like the pose, that is granted, and the design of the character isn't that bad, but the skill of drawing in the character needs to improve.
The sword looks like it was slapped on at the last minute, it is not how a sword should be. If you want any help on swords, take a tutorial or once again, try to look in a book, manual, or other picture.
Your character's face need to improve. It looks like his eyes are miniature black holes. The hands look like he only has three fingers, his index finger, his ring finger, and his thumb. The gloves could be better, but there are open lines in the picture and they need to be shaded in and checked on, because people will take notice of it.
The pants look very skinny and look like they will
hurt your legs. The pants need detail, like my
pants, they always have detail, and the shoes, once
again, they have open lines and those also looked
like they were slapped on at the last minute.
The ears don't even remotely look like ears(i know
Sonic has those ears, but you get it). They look
like extra spikes, so you could really improve on
the ears, because they don't have any detail.
I like the shirt design, but open lines ruin it.
I also see a white spot in the middle of your arm-
and-elbow area. That is unacceptable. People will
not approve of it and will try to harass you.
Overall, you really need to focus. The pose is
pretty good, the shirt design is Ok, the shading
sucks, the pants look half-assed, the sword doesn't
even look like a sword, the shoes aren't very
good, the gloves aren't very good either, the belt
is fair, but the white lines and open lines really
bring down the picture. The sword looks like a
long, curved beak. You better reply if you like
Constructive Criticism, because if you think this
is one of the best drawings you've ever done,
we REALLY need to talk privately. Case closed.