Let me first say you need to resize this, it's much too big.
Second i'd like to say that haracters flying through the sky via flame has been done, quite a few times, not original, but everyone seems to love it.
I can understand cartoony styles, but they always remind me of those cartoons on 4kids that are ruined by censorship and stupidity, so you never want to see them again.
The anatomy does bother me, I can notice you DID put some effort in making it noticable about the distance between each limb and so forth, but I don't doubt you used photoshop for the fire and the sky, and I always hate it when the fire looks better than the drawing. Looks like you need to use less special effects like George Lucas(the special effects whore of the world), or practice to become better.
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Let me first say you need to resize this, it's much too big.
Second i'd like to say that haracters flying through the sky via flame has been done, quite a few times, not original, but everyone seems to love it.
I can understand cartoony styles, but they always remind me of those cartoons on 4kids that are ruined by censorship and stupidity, so you never want to see them again.
The anatomy does bother me, I can notice you DID put some effort in making it noticable about the distance between each limb and so forth, but I don't doubt you used photoshop for the fire and the sky, and I always hate it when the fire looks better than the drawing. Looks like you need to use less special effects like George Lucas(the special effects whore of the world), or practice to become better.