dread.docx

by Onislize

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dread.docx

The sensors that provided the soldier with vision after his eyes failed had long since exhausted their power. He wandered blindly through the endless wastes, cursing the winds that grated against his numb flesh like sandpaper. There was determination without purpose in his solitary march. The once glorious Dreadfish captain was being punished.

That’s the problem with magic, he thought on pensive days, all you have to do is piss off some witch and suddenly you’re stuck in the desert like a stupid asshole.

He would distract himself by smelling the air. Detecting scents was impossible for him, of course—his condition didn’t allow for it. He had decided some time ago that fate primed him as a fighter, not a hunter, and had eliminated his vestigial senses in order to sharpen the essential ones. Then why can’t you see? he would think. Then why can’t you shut the hell up? he would think.

Still, from time to time he would take deep breaths through his unresponsive nostrils just for the sake of doing it; his lungs, caked with the dust of the barren wasteland that stretched incalculable distances in every direction, groaned in protest and he would hack and cough. Oddly enough, this was one of the few reflexes that he still possessed, one of the few that had not died along with most of his sensory system. He loved the feeling.

For months, this was his only entertainment. And then he smelled something.

At first, he attributed the sickly sweet scent to his imagination; it had disappeared as quickly as it came. It was a distant memory, a scent from his past that had come bubbling to the surface uninvited, nothing but a vestige of a remarkably irrelevant life. Until he smelled it again. The revenant captain stopped marching. The scent persisted this time, even without inhalation. It was in his mind.

Finally, he thought.

Almost languidly, he reached into a leather pouch at his waist and pulled out a palm sized black stone. Although he couldn’t see, he knew that it had noiselessly began to glow as it activated at his touch. The jewel’s magic stirred images in his mind, outlining the features of a young woman clad in dark armor and short robes. The psychic scent pulsed from the jewel in an erratic staccato.

“Captain. Things have changed. I need you here. Hope you have had fun. S.”

Necromantic energy erupted like red lightning from the gem, spinning around his head as the message echoed in his skull. His optic sensors reactivated with a whirr that was barely audible over the crackling of the magic. Data coursed through circuitry just under his skin, bypassing his dead eyes and flooding his mind with sight.

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May 14th 2009
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ugh why did i write this IT'S SO STUPID

sike i love it.

so there's been sort of a deluge (not that much actually) of terrible fish v swords prose lately. this writing took entirely too long (laze) and isn't really very good. but i'm proud-ish of it. i write because i can't draw but i'd say i'm pretty decent at writing. i wish that was the case on this site more often.

BUT ANYWAY contempt for writers worse than me aside:

i had a dreadfish character once. he was sort of important because he was the head dude who blew shit up and it was pretty sicknasty. but then the whole thing died off and it was whatever

but see my character had a weird accident with (i've forgotten if this is the right way to link avatars using vBcode or whatever the hell sheezyart uses, if that didn't work i'm not going to fix it) and her necromancer magic, turning him into a half-dead-zombie-thing-that-doesn't-eat-flesh-but-can-still-fuck-up-your-shit. a lot of his senses have deteriorated or have been lost altogether (touch, sight, smell) but he has retained a few and has some technology to keep him a workin' dude. so he doesn't really feel pain and the magic fights off necrosis and heals injuries relatively quickly and he has gray ish skin. his suit keeps his reflexes from going all to shit. i still haven't thought about how that works. suspension of disbelief okay? i had a picture of him once but i deleted it. it wasn't very good.

yeah but that's my story.

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NotKenny Says:

" awesome cool dreadfart dreadfish horrible shit shite "

Yep, that's definitely why I love you <3

SHiDa Says:

Yesssss so good to finally read what you have been writing!
Good stuff man-Jody-man!

bvhj Says:

i couldn't read it because it's a .docx

Galloglasses Says:

Yay, more FvS literature. Weren't you that sword guy who was only bleeding to death when Bogs tried to kill you but Some Necromancer person zapped you with magic and turned you into a wraith of some kind? A sorta zombie that isn't a zombie?

AaronGuy Says:

Not enough punching through walls/floors.

Bass clarinetgal2708 Says:

Nice, I like it. Your character is really interesting.

You Says:

I didn't know about this. :o