Remonozune

by ChimouStar

in Works in Progress

Description

May 13th 2009
Tags:
chief dragon dude god guy remonozune
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My boyfriend's character. Help me. I know something's off. I NEED TO FIX IT.

Comments

Sprite Killer Says:

The face looks just like a woman's face, but the body's a guy's body. Maybe that's the problem.
Try a stronger and more angular jaw, it may help.

Jaxxy Says:

I agree with sprite killer ^ Unless he's supposed to look feminine, try giving him a jaw with more angle to it like a dude. The V shape it's at now makes him look very womanly.
Also, maybe beef up the shoulders a bit. Guys have more bulk to their arms and right now the shoulders are 'slender' and drop off.
Hope that helps. :3