h y m n [Interlude - I]

The day starts off
Just as it began
The day before, and
The day before that

But unlike
A week, a month,
A year into the past,
Something unpredictable
Has come to me at last

And like a butterfly
She won’t stand to be pinned fast
Wings broken on the corkboard
Just beneath the glass

And unlike what’s happened
A year into the past,
She’s something unpredictable
That’s come to me at last

Something unpredictable
Has come to me at last.

(But even though I love her so,
Butterflies can be poisonous,
you know.)

> h y m n [Part 1.1]

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May 12th 2009

Tags:: hymn jericho lark lorelei
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First song.

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Apr 30th 2009

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Comments

pur plec loud Says:

:3 I love the verse about butterfliesssss

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Candless Says:

I didn't know butterflies could be poisonous.

D=

-sees a butterfly and runs awaaaay-

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windychan11 Says:

Wow, great rhyming!! Not only do I suck at rhyming, but I also suck at making songs!! Great song lyrics like this bring tears to my eyes. Almost. And it's your first song, too!! Great job, man!!