Okay...last issue,all of the IMP XS apart from Jake,got sent into different time zones and eras,this is Kaitos' part he looks different because this is what he looks like in the post apocyptic future which he now is in...I might add colour but then again,my style is sometimes like in manga colourless
IMP XS(c)
and myself
Kaitos (c) me
Soldiers (c) no-one
Comments
Jacob Numbat Says:
Wait a minute, you don't own IMP XS, only I do. I'll give you credit for the animated version and this page, (plus I'm not trying to be an asshole), but I'm pretty protective over ownership and stuff, so that's why I was kinda quick to be irritated.
Otherwise, this is fairly good and I'll be sure to base something off of this. Okay, so I can't really go by anything with Kaitos' journey almost immediately coming to an end, but I guess that's what I get for pressuring you to hurry up and create the 25th page. Still, I do know where I can go from here...
SDS123 Says:
cool! interesting story. i wounder if the time machine will send u back in time or send u to another place in time?
CrimsonFire88 Says:
Ok, i hope you enjoy C+C. Your characters don't look like a normal human being(or whatever the hell you are trying to make them look like), instead it looks like they came out of plastic surgery.
Your drawings in this comic could be so much better(i'm not trying to be a flamer), but it's true. You could use some more practice.
The arm area is where you really need to work. The arms go through the character's parts and don't look all that good, it looks like you could use some help on the arm areas.
On the first panel, that square thing and its lines go through the floor, and if you want to become a good artist, pay attention to your lines.
Your effects in the comic are one of the problems
i detected. The effects aren't very good, and maybe
i can help you on that one.
Your characters have too much detail and they are
all crammed into each other. That is a bad thing
to do, my friend, because people notice this and
don't accept it to be good. You need to minus the
detail in these smaller images. In Panel #4, the
diagonal lines go through the panel, and that is
not good for a comic book.
A couple of things i suggest are:
When your characters are smaller, like in panels,
minus the detail, because your characters had
WAY too much in them.
Work on the arm and leg areas, because the swords
and everything they carry look like they came out
of the hand, or the shirt is purposely part of
their legs, and i don't approve of that.
You need to work on effects, because these look
like grass and all that. If you need to follow a
tutorial or copy an image of something like that,
you may, but use credit.
And all of this adds up to your artstyle. I like
your artstyle, but the drawings just don't add
up, they aren't up to the standards of... well,
say like SonicRocksMySocks, or some one else.
I take it you are either using Flash or Photoshop.
You need to get a better tablet next time.
At the last panel, there is no period, question
mark, or exclamation mark. You need to work on those
kinds of expressions.
I hope you take my Criticism good, because you're
going to need. Just improvise, get a LITTLE
better at the drawing on a tablet, and be sure
to have confidence in your drawings, your ideas,
and yourself. Please take it seriously and i hope
it helps you later on in the future.