Again, I really love how you have some different, really interesting viewpoints of the character. The only thing I noticed that bothered me slightly is in the bottom right frame your mark making seemed to deviate from the norm of what I am used to seeing you use. Your line quality around her eye needed a little work it made her look... not beat up but it gives it a rather unusual feel i cant quite pin down.
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Dille Says:
Ohoho, this is way better with text. >
I love what you did with "Come." Very awesomely ominous. I seriously envy your human drawing skills. 
takekate Says:
Wow this is coming out awesomely. 8D
I love how things keep leaking out the panels.
Knightmare Dreams Says:
ohohoho~
reminds me of endling :] who is my inspiration for my comic to
black bg, grayscale and fulla awesome.
Fluffy Bunny of Doom Says:
Again, I really love how you have some different, really interesting viewpoints of the character. The only thing I noticed that bothered me slightly is in the bottom right frame your mark making seemed to deviate from the norm of what I am used to seeing you use. Your line quality around her eye needed a little work it made her look... not beat up but it gives it a rather unusual feel i cant quite pin down.