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Dreams or Reality?
A dream in the night
and you wake with a fright
you are not fit
for this fiery pit
You walk through the day and wonder
If your conscious is here or yonder
Are you really awake in this hell
Or dreaming well
You can never be sure
it is all just a blur
is your life a lie
or has it really went so arrie
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Comments
Bass clarinetgal2708 Says:
Nice, I like it. ^^
Yowl Says:
Very Clever,
it rhymes and sounds well all together.
I like it =)
pur plec loud Says:
:3 Nice short little poem--I like the rhyming.
The last line confused me a little though. Did you mean "awry" where you said "arrie"?