Goodbye To You

by Become So Numb

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Goodbye To You

Goodbye to you

Whispers trailing through my head
"No one will care when you are dead"
And I know it's true
I am gone from this earth
And I'll never return
You're only reading this because you're there
I know that you truly do not care

So goodbye to you
You who judge me now
You who judged me then
For the clothes that I wore
And the scars upon my skin
I hurt too much
To keep going on
I was living a fierce battle
And death has finally won

A few too many pills
Or a rope around my neck
There are so many choices
And not enough time
I must leave soon
Goodbye to you
For there is no turning back
What's done is done
You can never erase the past

So now walk away
Goodbye to you
Leave me in peace
Or pieces, I suppose
Enjoy the sun while you can
Because when you least expect it
You'll remember a gravestone
Small and gray
And remember who it is
That in that spot lays
Decomposing and alone
Cold to the touch
But free of this life

Goodbye to you

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May 6th 2009
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My friend is having a murder mystery party and asked me to write her a suicide letter in the form of a poem, and I actually really like it. So I decided to go a little further with it and experiment and here it is. Ta da.

Comments

The Emperor Says:

..very nice, I would say your friend choose the right person to write this. ^^

Nightstar Says:

Insane, and very creative. I got a little worried until I read the comment before, and then I got it. Nicely done!

Neji Luver101 Says:

8D I love thisssssssssss :D Great, fantastic job :))))

martysexylegs Says:

i love it! now i want a murder mystery party haha sounds amazing and this work is great i loves it!