War!!!!!!!

by Master Player

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War!!!!!!!

BOOM!!! BANG!!! POW!!!! are the sounds of gunshots being fired past me
They are coming towards us not willing;not trying to flee
I look around watching them being shot down
I look left then right and see a comrade get a gun pointed towards their head then POW!!!

We charge their defense hoping to capture one of them
Moments later myself and my men are in a place that looks like it could be condemn
My men are tied up and bloody and are gasping for breath
And one of them are on the verge of death

A terrible odor enters the room
In the back of my mind I think it's our doom
Then all of a sudden one of THEM kicks down the wall
And he's holding some type of ball

Then I notice that it has a spark at the tip
I yell bomb and kick it outside and it hits a blimp
A load explosion erupts through the air
One of my men suddenly starts growling like a bear

My sniper realizes that the bars that are holding us are weak
I break out of mine and rescue my men and the General is the person we seek
We find him by the shore
And travel until we reach the door

The door of FREEDOM!!!!!

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Apr 29th 2009
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A poem/story of me and my men at WAR!!!


I can take anything that you guys and girls can throw at me!!!! So comment!!!

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Jordan Kendall Says:

There are some errors in this. For example, 'And one of them are on the verge of death' I think it should be 'And one of them IS on the verge of death.