---TSCI comment---
Ok here is Page 2 of Issue 1 of Sped Z.S. chronicles. And it did clear up the question of why Sped was knocked out, but to whom he was talking too we will have to wait a while to find out. And yes no more transparent hair. And now it's time for some random Sped Z.S. Chronicles Universe ( SCU) information. The main planet on which this story takes place is called Neo Earth, now whether it's the future of this earth or another earth all together it will all be explained later on in the comic. In SCU all the cell phones, ipods, mp3 players, portable computers, and more have all been ported to watches, and right now both Jay and Nick is talking to Sped through his watch. I also know that there may be a few mistakes so if there is I will try to make adjustments in the future and I hope my art style will see improvement too, the more the comic goes on, the better the art will be as I get more used to drawing in a comic style.
Till then later...
~Sped
---SA comment---
OMG I'm so sorry it took like a month to finish this, I've been overly busy lately, infact my family came over last night and they didn't leave till 6:00AM! And yes it was fun
but things like family coming over and work and WoW and games, well... you should have some idea of where I'm going with this... this last month have been the active month for me in a very long time, and next month looks almost the same BUT hopefully it will cool down later on
~sped
--- DA's Comic---
Sorry for having to re-upload the page but it had a few minor adjustments to be made, so please feel free to comment again or fav it because this page shouldn't be going anywhere... And thank-you for all your support!
~sped
Sped the hedgehog, Sped Z.S. chronicles (c) Jeremy holder
Comments
HeavyWeaponsGuy Says:
NICE JOB RODENTMAN IN DELETING LEGITIMATE CRIT. I SPY WITH MY LITTLE EYE WHAT YOU DID
NOW I SAY SOME CRIT FOR YOU
1. THE COLORS ARE TOO BRIGHT AND CONTRAST TO STRONGLY WITH EACH OTHER. CHOOSE OTHER COLOR BESIDE BRIGHT NEON AND MORE NEUTRAL COLORS LIKE WARM BROWN AND GERY AND COLOR BE MUCH BETTER
2. LEARN TO SCRIPT BETTER, IT NOT READ LIKE COMIC BUT MORE LIKE SCRIPT, AND THAT IS BAD
3. DO SOMETHING MORE ORIGINAL THAN COPYING SEGA STYLE AND SPIKY RODENTS. THERE IS MUCH MORE THAT CAN BE DONE, YOU JUST GOT TO EXPAND TO THINGS OTHER THAN A CRAPPY GAME STYLE. TRY AND PEOPLE WON'T BE SO EAGER TO COME AFTER YOU.
Do svidaniya!
PERsOnaliST Says:
Meh
its alright
try to come up with your own poses next time however.
and maybe spend a little more time/effort on this for great looks.
Not bad. I can see you've been working on the shading and it looks much better ^^ Maybe next you could think about using thinner lines. It takes awhile to get used to, but when you are drawing small screens it helps make the colours come through and not just the lines.
Look great,need more sketch