Around the same day i made "Dan cmere" I had my friend Santina come over with her acoustic electric guitar and record something so i would mess with it. This was the result ;]
It still is kinda cool, but, as ya'll know, i can do a much better job ;]
Oooh, wow. This is so mellow and melancholy and lovely...
It seems to be begging for some vulnerable vocals and a guitar solo...This could really, really turn into something special.
Comments
I like it very much indeed. It's both relaxing and progressive. I could see this as a great driving song any day. ^^
WCP Says:
Ooo! Groovy.
SallyMusic Says:
I like the sound and feel of the song, I feel it could do with something else, maybe vocals or a solo instrument over the top. Very promising!
Oooh, wow. This is so mellow and melancholy and lovely...

It seems to be begging for some vulnerable vocals and a guitar solo...This could really, really turn into something special.
Minstrel Ayreon Says:
I agree with those who say it would be well-suited by vocals. :) I can hear a nice alto vocalist, someone mellow like Norah Jones.
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I could even do something as long as I kept the melody in range. Just need lyrics, though...