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Mar 31st 2009
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ball thingy digital drawing guy leap magic
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Submitted to completed works because i highly doubt this will ever be coloured :C.

so ya... critique please :)

Comments

Zetsubou Eureka Says:

You know you draw menz good, so I can't say much. ^____^

shadychaos Says:

that looks kool it would be a shame if u didnt colour it D:
all i can say is the right hand looka abit funny as in i dont think a man would have his hand like that but ya not much ^^;
nose looks abit off maybe :3

takekate Says:

Woah I think this looks really cool. :>
Nice perspective! <3
Maybe ask someone else to color it~?

POPAROCKA Says:

So needs color~!!!
I love this great work.

DoodleCat Says:

I wish I could give critique! I'm bad at perspective critique. D:

Zannyhyper Says:

That looks alot better, although his right hand(our left) still seems a tad, awkard....also the part of the arm between teh hand and elbow(same side his right our left) still looks like a brick in a sock xD'

Otherwise I do like this pic...and it reminds me of Logan...

kookybat Says:

whhoooaaa! Cool perspective, and the background really gives it a sense of crazy movement. It makes me feel dizzy!! xD