Character Reference Sheet 7 - Onan

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Character Reference Sheet 7 - Onan

ONAN

Onan is a senior member of F.L.I.G.H.T. and Keena's mentor.

He botched up his mission on the night that Keena was attacked. After being left permanently blinded by a demon, it then turned on Keena, where she defeated it with relative ease. Onan then takes her back with him to F.L.I.G.H.T's base and to save him from having to commit suicide for failing his mission, Keena becomes a member of the organisation herself (on the condition that Onan trains her).

Because Onan is no longer able to officially undergo missions himself, in a way he sees Keena as his replacement. As a result, he may push Keena too hard from time to time. In truth though, he cares for Keena somewhat like a daughter.

Onan is probably the one character who's design changed most frequently and drastically. I finally settled on long white hair with a green fringe. He now has hollow eyes, since he lost his vision, but they used to be brown.

Small piece of trivia - Onan is a Hebrew name, meaning strength or power.

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Mar 17th 2009
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Next up are the characters for the story I am currently in the process of developing. Which is loosely, and I mean VERY loosely based on some of the events, changes and lessons I went through in my adolescent and early adult years. I've been working with the title, 'Bell the Cat'.

The story is set in the not too distant future, where an average school student is attacked by a demon. Due to her newfound ability to see these creatures, she is recruited by a demon hunting group known as F.L.I.G.H.T. (the Federation for the Liquidation of iner-Galactic Herds Taskforce).

It follows the student through her times, trying to fit in, learn new skills, control her abilities, fall in love and rebelling against the system.

I am very pleased with how this story is developing, the characters and settings have become incredibly vivid and I have plotted out several arcs so far. I just need to sit down and write it.

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