one of two main characters in a story I wrote that's on Yiffstar now,that's been sitting on my computer since Junior year High School (about 10 years now)
Note:for those who want to see my first ever and possibly only story send me a PM and I will send you the link.
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Darkgun Says:
Well heck, why don't ya post the fiction you mentioned?
This is good. Not sure what she's sitting on, but hey.
I feel that you could have done a little more with the proportions to make the character more dynamic, even though she does happen to be sitting on a... thing....